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fullview pls

Birthday present for FuzzMaster.

Initial drawing done on paper, scanned, inked/colored in Inkscape, and then shading/rainbow done in GIMP 2.0.



this took forever

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laughing

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I'll counter-object that objection into the object in your objective FACE
:iconmedaforcer:
I like the pretty dotting

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I'm radioactive
:iconmedaforcer:
I like the rainbow too

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I'm radioactive
:iconfimiketalpines:
The rainbow was originally just going to be a gradient

it looked TERRIBLE

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:iconfuzzmaster:
fantasticmaster

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:icongarygill:
You need to work on your composition. But in terms of style and colour, it's wonderful. One of my favourite pieces from you.

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Art makes life interesting.
:iconfimiketalpines:
Can you define composition for me?

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:icongarygill:
Oh sorry. It is the placement of objects and colours. You see depending on how you place objects and colours, you can direct the eye a certain way.

One thing you do good in your composition is making a lot of the central figures facing and shooting towards Fuzz and therefore drawing the eye towards him. Also, the bright yellow contrasts the dark which also draws in the eye.

But the one thing that bothers me is how a lot of the characters seem to be placed almost at random around the image. It looks like you took a bunch of pictures that worked well by themselves and pasted them into one big image. So although they look great individually the piece as a whole lacks unity.

When the composition is well done, your eye just moves around the image comfortably and you can almost get lost in it. When it's not well done your eye doesn't know what to focus on and instinctively loses interest. This is how you can judge what is good composition and what is bad.

But again, I love this. The characters are great.

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Art makes life interesting.
:iconkenshinmeowth:
Rainbow x thw way you draw cats = bootiful

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Blue helmet, blue shoes, blue buster, blue attitude

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